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Hey! I came here to see more of your games since I've just been absolutely obsessed with Yandere Heaven and Love in Lockdown!! It's been such a long time since I saw such good yandere games, I just couldn't stop playing until I read everything. I wish I could support you, but unfortunately I'm broke...So I figured rating and commenting would be the best way to support for now ^^' Keep up the good work, I really look forward to seeing more from you!!

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That's so cool! I'm really glad you ended up enjoying my other stuff :3 Thanks so much for playing ^-^ I have mixed feelings about Love in Lockdown cos that just didn't come out how I wanted it to at all x3 haha. I really struggled with the writing, and a big part of me wanted to give up and not even bother turning it into a game because I was so unhappy with my story draft for it >.< I decided to just make it anyways because I'd already entered the jam and didn't want to back out. But yeah, I'm not particularly proud of that one x3 So it makes me super happy to know you managed to extract some enjoyment from it despite my personal feelings on it! 

Honestly, any kind of support means the world to me ^-^ So yeah, ratings + comments is a huuuuge help. Donations may help me continue developing games when it comes to being able to afford to pay people for their time and talent, but kind words are just as valuable! So I really appreciate it :3 

You're welcome to gave a key for DD if you wanna let me know the best place to send it! OR, if you wanna hold on for a little while, I'm making everything free to download on here for like 24 hours or something soon to celebrate the end of yandere jam :3 I just can't do it right now cos I'm on my phone >.< and messing with settings on itch is just really fiddly on mobile, haha. So I can't put the sale thingy on until I'm actually on my PC either later today or tomorrow! 

Thank you for your support :3 

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I think all the free copies are out for now, so I think I can wait! I'm currently playing Solipsism Reigns. I'm really loving every game of yours I've tried!! Thank you so much for considering your broke fans haha, I've never seen anyone like you before! I'll do my best to keep on supporting you the way I can!! And honestly, I hope you like Love in Lockdown a little more because it's seriously so good!! I hope you're doing well dear creator ^^

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SR is a pretty long one, but also my oldest game, because yes, I was a little bit insane and decided to make a full-length VN for my first project x3 It ended up taking years, haha. I really should have started out with something smaller!

You'll probably notice that it's a lot more clunky than Yandere Heaven and LiL as well, not just because it was the first game I made, but also because it was made in the old engine I was using, which wasn't great, but it was all I knew how to use at the time >.< I think the new engine I'm using nowadays makes stuff turn out a lot smoother!

Well, I'm perma-broke myself soooo, I know the feeling x3 I can pretty much only afford new games by trading in old ones, and that usually means giving up 3 or more just to get 1, haha. So I'll always try to make my stuff available to as many people as possible :3

I guess I was probably too harsh on myself about LiL >.< I'm just glad that you were able to enjoy it! Because knowing that certainly makes me feel less like beating myself up over it every time I see it on my page, haha.

I've just been fixing bugs on Yandere Heaven + starting to try and get my DD project files updated to a newer version of Nani and Unity cos they're pretty out of date now. The problem is, when my stuff is so old that it's missed multiple updates, things always end up breaking when I try to update it all, haha. So I'm probably gonna have to spend a while just fixing all the files!

I'm currently exporting the bug fix builds for Yandere Heaven for upload tonight though, and once they're all up, I'll activate the free copies of DD :3 Unless something goes wrong, I should have it done by midnight my time (GMT), but I can always shoot you a quick reply here to let you know when it's live anyhow :3

Thanks again for all your kind words!

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No problem dear creator!! It's great hearing you've been working so hard, I hope you've been taking care of yourself :D I hope you get more recognition!! 

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Aaaand, it should be working now if I've done everything correctly to set it to free download for a limited time :3

AAAAA did I miss it?!?! D: It's not free for me

I'm so sorry but would you mind if I just contacted you? I couldn't access my laptop yesterday D:

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Yeah, it finished at midnight my time x3 But no worries, you're welcome to drop me an email! You don't even have to write anything. Just put your username in the subject line so I know who it is :3
melancholicmarionette@gmail.com

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Hello, I was curious, if we buy the full version for 2$, does that include the future episodes if ever, or are they separate payment? Thanks

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Hey hey! Thanks so much for your interest in the project :3 

I made a little post a while back that sort of briefly answers your question, so I'm gonna be a bit lazy and link that since I'm away from home at the moment and can't type very fast on my phone x3 haha. 

https://melancholy-marionette.itch.io/darling-duality-winter-wish/devlog/271784/...

I did give a more in depth answer in a comment a long time ago, but I'm not entirely sure where abouts that is to go and quote it/copy my answer >.<

The short answer though, is that (hopefully) this will be a commercial game once it's eventually finished. I don't know what sorta price it will be, but it'll have a lot of content. The current $2 price on here is pretty much just a donation to help support the game's development rather than an actual purchase. However, I'll always endeavour to make my games available to anyone who can't afford to support with money + make sure to take into consideration any donations as a discount towards the eventual final release price :3 

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Came across this game on explore and while i cant afford it i found manly's video on it and im in love with Castoria + voice acting!! wish this game came onto my radar earlier, love your work :))

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Thanks for taking the time to write such kind words :3 I really appreciate it! Yeah, I owe Manly a hell of a lot cos if not for him featuring DD, not many people would know the project even exists still since I suck at social media x3 haha. 

You're welcome to gave a key anyhow if ya let me know the best place to send it! OR, if you don't mind hanging on a little bit, I'm gonna make everything free to download for like 48 hours or something to celebrate the end of yandere jam :3 I just can't make the changes until I get on my PC either later today or tomorrow cos itch is too hard to fiddle with on mobile, haha. 

I'm looking forward to having more time to myself this year to work on DD's development anyhow :3

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You are the sweetest person for giving this game out for free, its downloading now :) thank you so much and i'm so excited to play!!

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Hello, dear author! I just played your game, and I'm already a fan of it! Love the character designs, Castoria is so cute hehe. And the music is pretty good, too. I wish you all the best for the next chapter!

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Thanks so much for playing + for taking the time to write such a lovely comment ^-^ I really appreciate it! I shall be working as much as possible on the next chapter this month :D So I'll definitely be needing that luck, haha. 

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I finally got to play this game and what can I say, I.AM.SOLD!!! Castor is such a bae, I can't hate him no matter how I convince myself that he's unstable and dangerous and he might end up killing me lol guess that's my type. VA is superb, art is flawless, story telling is amazing. The author is too kind beyond words. I am looking forward to play your future games, Melancholy Marionette! - Sayaka

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I'm glad you ended up enjoying it ^-^ Hehe, yeah, he's kinda adorable and terrifying at the same time x3 Don't tell any of my other characters cos if they ever become sentient, they'll probably murder me, but I think Castor might end up becoming my favourite yandere that I've created, haha. 

I'll be working as much as I can on DD's next update throughout this month, and I'm planning for it to include more Castor/ia content along with introducing another character :3 So hopefully, you'll still like him once you've been able to spend more time with him x3

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came here from manly, made an account just to say bravo! very well-made looking game! can't play it myself, but I have high hopes for your future with it!

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Aww, that's so sweet of you! Thank you :3 I've learned a lot since I released what little is there of the game so far, so when I eventually release the next update which will add another character to the roster along with more content for Castor/ia, I'm also going to have gone over everything that's already there from the old jam submission and tweak a lot of stuff to make it smoother and fancier :3 Cos while I was working on Limbo Line, I learned a lot more about stuff like adding SFX to UI and such, haha. 

Can you not play it cos you don't have a system that will run it? :o Or do you just need a key? Cos if you need a key, I can give you one :3

It should end up being a fairly long game once all the planned content is released for it, but it's gonna be a pretty long journey to get there x3

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Believe me when I say I'll be staying updated as best I can, and I already told a few of my friends who like vns about this game!

I would be thankful for a key though, would I need to email you?

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Awesome stuff :D I really appreciate you mentioning it to people cos I am totally abysmal at promoting my stuff cos of my anxiety >.< haha.

 Sadly, development is gonna be relatively slow since I'm pretty much working on the project solo (aside from the voice acting, of course :3), but once February is over, it'll be my full-time focus ^-^ I just don't have much free time this February, so rather than trying to get back into working on the next DD update, I figured I'd be better off whipping up something short for itch's first ever Yandere Jam to get me used to working on stuff again after I had a couple of months' break from project stuff cos of my poopy mental health x3 Plus, I mean, it's a Yandere Jam, and yandere is my jam xD How could I not submit something!

With any luck though, once I'm able to dedicate most of my time to DD, I'll be able to get stuck in and make some good progress throughout March and onwards :3 Most of the content for the next update is already written, I just need to tidy it up, finish it off, and get to coding it all in.

And sure, I guess dropping me an email to: melancholicmarionette@gmail.com is the easiest way! Don't worry about writing anything in the email cos if you just put your username from here in the subject line then I'll know it's you anyways :3

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holy moly this is so well made- i had so much fun with this - that im really looking forward to more- 

I wish u the best on this and ur other projects - i cant wait for more honestly but no pressure really
again thanks for the key

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So glad you ended up enjoying it :3 There's lots more to come, but it's gonna take me a while to make it x3 Which is why I'm gonna do it episodically or it'll be forever until the full game is out >.< I'm quite busy this month and trying to make a submission for itch's first ever yandere jam in the few days I have in February to work on something short. As soon as it hits March, I'll be working solely on getting the next episode of DD released :3

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wish u the best!! stay healthy and take care of urself 

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i wish this game was on steam so i could  buy it ;__; cause i cant on itchio 

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I'd like to have it on Steam eventually, but the $100 fee to add a game there is kind of a killer >.< especially when I don't really have the means to promote my stuff. I will get it on there someday though! 

In the meantime, you're welcome to have a key if you wanna let me know where to send it :3

i would love to have a key - should i perhaps sent u an email? and ask

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Go for it :3 You don't even need to write anything. If you just put your username from here and DD in the subject line then I'll know it's you :D Just send it to melancholicmarionette@gmail.com 

Just so you know though, I'm heading to bed for the night, so I probably won't get back to you with a key until I get on my PC tomorrow :3

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Hey hey! If it was in the last few days, I've been away from home with little to no internet access x3 My best friend organised a few days away for us as a birthday celebration. I only just got back today, but we live pretty far away from each other, so I'm shattered from all the travel. I'll be back on my PC tomorrow though, so I can check my email and drop you a key then :3 It's just very difficult to do it on my phone cos itch's site is so fiddly on mobile >.<

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dw take ur time - wish ya a good night 

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hello, thought i'd let you know i shot you an email a few days ago, i wanna play this game myself but i can't afford it. (Sorry if you're busy and i come off as annoying, i just really want to play the game, whenever you can, send me an email back)

My mail: tynatyn66@gmail.com

No worries! I wasn't on my PC yesterday cos it was my birthday but if you hadn't of written this comment, I would never have known you emailed me, as for some reason, your message went into my spam folder rather than my inbox, and I never check the spam >.< I managed to find it though after reading this :3 I've sent you a reply with a key anyhow!

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I really loved the game and definitely would love to see more Castoria in the future. While I would not call the characters yandere per se, I kinda have a soft spot for yandere yuri with a sweet ending so I appreciated the gender neutral language for the player with a subtle hint that the character is female. I normally don't comment on them, or think they're well written in games, but I thought the sex scene in the full version was very well written too.

I feel sorry for Castoria (and Castor) as they're kind people with sentience and an obsessive love forced on them. In some ways, they're the victims though the protagonist had no way of knowing what she created when she made that wish. I guess my hope for them would be that they learn to become more rounded and independent people over time but remain with the protagonist.

Thank you. I paid above the minimum price and don't regret. I will look at your other VNs too.

To note, Manly lead me to your work (he got me hooked on VNs in the first place).

I'm not sure if you're the same person I've spoken to on Ko-fi or not (since the username is the same, haha), but regardless, I didn't wanna just leave your comment unanswered! x3

Regarding the gender-neutral language, that was what I originally intended to run with throughout the entire game so that players can sort of decide for themselves whatever they would prefer the characters to be. However, it did make writing the more risque scene pretty difficult, and I'm not entirely sure I possess the ability to continue writing scenes like that without referencing gender at all. So that alongside a number of players preferring more gender-specific language has lead me to think about perhaps just giving the player a choice of pronouns for their MC instead for future updates. Maybe it's the sort of thing I should be running a poll on, I don't know >.< 

What I do know is that I don't really think about gender when I write for characters. Maybe my brain is weird or something, but I just don't really see gender when I'm writing. To me, all the characters could be any and all genders x3 So I like to give the player some form of choice. 

I'm super glad that you thought that particular scene was well-written too because it's very much outside of my comfort zone xD I wanted to give it a go because I knew I wanted it to be a part of Castor/ia's character. But I myself am asexual, so it was a bit of an awkward one, haha. Editing the voice acting for that scene was uh, interesting! It was kind of like some strange form of embarrassing hell xD

I certainly hope I can show Castor/ia's growth (or escalation into further madness, depending on the player's choices xD) in a satisfying way as their story unfolds :3

Thank you so much for the support :3

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Yeah, I'm the same person. :)

I think the gender neutral language is fine without having to add additional choice for specific pronouns but others may disagree. I guess it's a cost/benefit analysis of the extra time put into being able to choose pronouns but if it's easier for you to write modifications of scenes based on pronoun selection that's a reasonable adjustment, I'd just hope neutral pronouns would also remain an option as that would be my personal preference (I prefer to play AFAB non-binary people).

On the issue of the sex scene, maybe the asexuality gave you a more objective look. I was playing a different yandere LI VN recently, and the sex scenes in the sequel made me feel more uncomfortable, first because the author added a visual component which came out of the blue and just made me feel like clicking through the scene faster (I was expecting a before and after like in the first game) and secondly the writing wasn't great but I don't want to criticise too much as I otherwise enjoyed her games.  That's before even getting into the issues triple A games have with using sex scenes. I think part of it was Castoria's voice actor was very good at making the lines sound genuine.

The character development is just my personal hopes. I have to put the appeal of yandere and yandere-like characters in the context of abuse I've suffered growing up and in a previous relationship and what that says about me so I think my hope they get a good ending is just a personal psychological need. A yandere-like person irl in a relationship who doesn't grow beyond that is going to end up in an abusive or co-dependent relationship unless their partner is very careful based on the experiences of real people with similar personality disorders (most yandere characters would be a mixture of DSM-5 clusters B and C). I've never seen it explored, usually the yandere ends up the abuser, but I could see a yandere character ending up the victim of abuse because they would be easy to manipulate emotionally.

You're welcome, you've earned the support. I'll continue to support in the future too.

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i am here because of manly but all i have to say is nice shoutout lol

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Yeah, I owe Manly a lot cos if he hadn't played this, hardly anyone would know about it still because I totally suck at social media and trying to get my games out there >.< haha.

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I loved the game, it was so sweet! I'm not sure if you've said already or not but do you have any plans to have it available for mobile?

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That's awesome to hear ^-^ I've been inactive for the last couple of months for personal reasons, but I'm back and working on my projects again, so, hopefully, the next episode of DD shouldn't be toooo far away since the writing is almost finished now.

I would certainly love to have it on mobile if I can manage it, yeah :D I only tried exporting one of my games for mobile back when I was using Tyranobuilder, and it just failed completely even though I was following a guide >.< I'm kind of hoping that exporting for Android and IOS from Unity will be an easier process, but I've yet to actually try it!

But yeah, I'm hoping to eventually have my games playable on mobile + Switch as well as PC :3

Ah, sounds good. Thank you for the reply and take care ok?

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I´m simping for Castor so much haha. I loved your game, I definitely can´t wait for more! :)

I'm glad you had fun with it :3 It's been slow going on the dev front due to a lot of issues in my personal life >.< but I'm back now and actively working on my projects again, so with any luck, I should be able to get the next episode out before the end of spring or something :3 Thanks so much for checking it out!

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Hello i think your game is amazing, i actually can't think of any complaints, it was so well done i was wanting more by the end. Maybe in the future you can bring Cana(i think I'm remembering that correctly, hopefully lol) the best friend into the scene to create drama, external conflicts could be a way to make the good route have some intensity, but whatever you do I'm sure it'll be awesome, like your other games. oh btw just one more thing i swear, did you do all the writing? Because I'm super impressed, i thought it was top notch, you deserve an award. anyways cheers! Happy holidays! Looking forward to whatever you create :)

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Hey hey! Thank you for playing through the game and taking the time to comment :3 I really appreciate it!

*Whispers* I see you're very perceptive with remembering Cana, hehe. I probably shouldn't say this because it's kinda spoilers at this moment in time, but Cana is actually the next character who will be introduced and I've already half-written their introductory episode! I won't say too much, but Cana and Castor/ia will definitely get to meet depending on the player's choices :D But ssshh, that's supposed to be a secret for now xD I just hope not many people read my reply to your comment, haha. *Stops whispering*

I do indeed do all the writing, yeah :3 I'm so glad you think it's decent! I'm always very self-conscious about it, especially when I'm working in a team like I did for A9 and Limbo Line, because I tend to worry that my writing will be what lets everything down when everyone else has done such amazing work with art and voice acting! >.< I don't have any proper qualifications when it comes to creative writing aside from my English GCSE from secondary school x3

Thanks for your support ^-^ Hope you have some happy holidays yourself and a super duper new year!


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well thank you for making it i had tons of fun it was awesome. *Cough cough* spoilers? What spoilers? I don't see any *whispers* ok i think we're clear, keep going XD that sounds so cool, but also oh boy does that sounds like ticking time bomb, my boy mc is in for one helluva ride especially if he chose the sinister route this drama sounds juicy! Hehe let's go *cough cough stops whispering* anyways, i more than think ur writing is decent, it's spectacular, no where did i get taken back by the dialogue, it never seemed out of place or artificial, it seemed like what an actual gacha game yandere and a normal admittedly tactless mc would say to each other, hell, the fights even felt like they were already an

 old married couples lol, it felt very very realistic, and honestly fresh, i so appreciate an mc who has his own feelings, and that there's gonna be problems and fights, it was super entertaining and refreshing, and it flowed naturally, so i can be invested and stay in the flow, definitely some top notch writing, honestly having a piece of paper to say you qualify as a writer is overrated when you've proved your skills over and over again in each game you make, just write what you want to write and read it over and over to tidy it up, if you think it's something you'd read and enjoy than you're done, you can't please everyone because everyone likes different styles so write it for you and watch as you will get more and more appreciation for it. Have a holly jolly Christmas and have a happy new year!

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This is gonna be a long comment

So I stumbled upon this gorgeous game while I was scrolling through itch.io. I recently bought a new laptop so trying out every type of games and I'm huge fan of dating Sims lol. I always play on phone but I wanted to experience on laptop so bought this game. This is simply gorgeous I'm a huge fan of Castor now! Finished both of his routes. I am so sad this gorgeous game isn't famous yet! I really liked it that want to open a fanpage only for Castor. I'm a huge Simp of him now. And not to mention the sound effects, visuals, the voice acting! 😍. I'm waiting for its update!! I want to play it more. 

I might actually open a page for him and write fanfics everyday. Sorry if I'm being creepy but I've played several other Similar games and I forgot them but I can't forget about this!! This is beautiful!! Is it possible to release it on phones? Then I would've shared it with everyone! I know it's hard but thank you so much for this. I shouldn't drag this so good luck with improving This game more I'm with youuu!!❤️❤️. I might draw Castor now cuz he is so cute UwU. 

I kinda want it to grow like Obey me, Mystic Messenger etc. 

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Sorry my reply is so slow >.< I'm a bit overwhelmed with everything at the moment and a lot of stuff going on in my personal life. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave such a kind comment though :3

I'm glad you enjoyed your time with Castor :D There will be plenty more content for him to come in the future + lots of other characters too. It's just going to take me a while to make it all, haha.

If you do end up opening a fan page for Castor, I'd love to see it :3 And I'm sure Castor very much adores having anyone simp for him :D It's not creepy at all anyways! I get really hyped about the stuff I'm passionate about too :3

I do hope to be able to release it on mobile at some point when it's a bit more polished, yeah! I'm not sure how it will go because I haven't tried mobile export with Unity yet. I tried to test it back when I was using Tyranobuilder engine, but it didn't work at all and I was just very confused xD Hopefully, it will go better when I attempt it with Unity, haha. I think a lot of tweaking of the UI will be required though so that it doesn't go all weird on mobile.

It sure would be amazing if the game somehow grew to that level of fame, haha. I doubt it'll ever happen, but I can dream x3 I'd really love to be able to earn a living making VNs someday, even though it's something which is apparently super hard to do :( It might be my only shot at supporting myself because my therapist thinks I'm basically screwed at life because of my autism if I can't manage to make a living out of my games, haha.

Thank you so much for the support ^-^

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Sure! Take your time developing! and take a rest too. I'm sure it will grow more because talents don't stay hidden. I'll always keep giving my support to this game❤️❤️. I can't leave castor behind lol

I'm excited for future updates though ( /^ω^)/♪♪

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Hello,

Just finished playing your game with Castoria. I just have to say I honestly loved it! I was highly impressed with the voice acting and how you did the sprites for the characters. The writing was really good. I also enjoyed how Castoria and the Protag both had interesting personalities. As others have said in the comments, the Protag not being in a blank state and a bit sassy was rather fun plus refreshing to see. 

I played the full game and wasn't expecting that final scene at the end. But it turned out to be rather lovely with its resolution. I haven't played the Sinister "route" (would it be called a route?) yet, but the Sweet "route" has me wanting some more! I know you are a rather busy person, but do you have an estimate of when is the next release? If not that's okay! Just keep doing the great work you are doing here! You have definitely made a fan out of me! :D

P.S. Also looking forward, Solipsism Reigns BxG Version whenever it comes out. 

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Thanks so much for supporting the project and leaving a comment! It's much appreciated ^-^ Glad you enjoyed your time with Castoria even if there's not all that much content there yet! 

I've become a little bit obsessed with having a crazy amount of expression changes for sprites in my VNs, haha. I think because I wish I could use Live2D but don't possess the skills, so instead, I try my best to use lots of expression changes and other forms of movement to make scenes look more animated. 

I guess once the game is more complete, you could consider the sweet and sinister options to be routes, yeah :3 Cos the 'endings' from the current version are actually more like the end of Castor/ia's 1st episode going by my outline. So in a more completed version, it's more like you're sort of locked in to the sweet or sinister route at that point. Though, there will also be more that goes towards deciding which route you end up on eventually because there will be more choices to make. 

My plan was to have an update out in time for Christmas this year that introduces the next character  while also adding more content for Castor/ia since it will have been a full year since I released the first part for the jam. Unfortunately, I don't think I'm going to manage that after all >.< I'm still in the writing stage for the next part, and struggling to concentrate on it. I've got a lot going on in my personal life at the moment, and my routine has kinda gone out of the window :( I've had a lot of appointments to be up early for, which means lots of early nights to bed. The problem is, almost everything I've written has been done so during the night! I don't know why, but I can just focus a lot better on writing when I do it during the night, and I'm not getting the opportunity to do that at the moment >.<

It doesn't help that I haven't worked on the project in such a long time because I was working on a few other jam projects throughout the year. DD is my main focus now though :3 Even if I can't get the next part out in time for Christmas, it should at least end up being sometime in winter or early spring, even if it's 2022 rather than 2021.

And there certainly shouldn't be any more year-long gaps in between updates unless things go very wrong in my life! Haha. 

The BxG version of SR is a looooong way off though >.< 

Thank you so much for your kind words and your support :3

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Sorry, for the very late reply! I didn't realize I got a response from you. Curse you spam! That aside, I did notice the expression changes you have in the game and it was very impressive. It is a lot of work but makes the characters more "real".  Still good to hear that sweet and sinister will be their "own" routes. 

I hope you have been getting better and life is treating you well. Looking forward to the next update no matter when it comes out. Take care of yourself and stay strong! 

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No worries! Most of my replies have been super duper late recently anyways because I'm just kinda overwhelmed at the moment and shutting down >.< haha.

Take care yourself and I hope you get to have some happy holidays and a wonderful new year ^-^

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HI i dont have much constructive to say other than i really really love this project <3 ive replayed it more times than id like to admit....

the way the yandere sides of castor/ia reveal themselves and how the mc isnt just a blank piece of wood but has an actual backbone, especially the mean stuff they say to castor/ia! i know the art isnt yours but i adore how it looks, you picked perfectly! i wish you luck on your future projects and will be supporting you all the way <3

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I really appreciate any and all comments on my projects, so thank you very much for playing what's there of the game so far and taking the time to comment :3 I'm so glad you've enjoyed it so far even though there's not much there yet. 

I'm happy you like the MC cos they seem to be a bit like marmite xD People either love it or hate it, haha. I just wanted the story to have a protagonist with a bit more sass because they're gonna end up in a lot of dangerous situations, and I don't want them to be the type of MC that just rolls over and lets bad stuff happen to them cos I've played too many VNs with passive protagonists and it annoys me as a player x3 I do plan on adding more options in future updates though, so that the player has a bit more control over how MC reacts because I also understand how frustrating it is to have an MC act in a way that's really opposed to how you want them to. 

I'm glad you like the sprites too cos even though I didn't draw them, I did spend a hell of a lot of time on the colours and creating additional expressions for them that didn't come as standard :3 

I had hoped to get the next episode of DD out in time for Christmas, but I don't think that's going to happen because I planned for it to both introduce a new character and add to Castor/ia's content, and a lot of life stuff is going on with me right now so I haven't been able to be as productive as I would like >.<

 Thank you so much for the support  :3

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Will there be a full version or is this the complete game?

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Thanks for your interest in the project :3 The page isn't particularly tidy at the moment and some of the comments where I answered similar questions to this have been buried >.< haha. I'll have to try and organise the page better when I next update the game!

I'll give you the short(ish) answer, and then I'll also be somewhat lazy and give you the super long answer copy/pasted from something I wrote previously :3

So the short answer is that the game is nowhere near complete right now. What's available is more like a little taster episode for one of many characters :3 I made it during a jam that lasted 1 month, so there's not a huuuuge amount of content there yet. My plan is to have around 10 characters for the full version of the game, with about 3 episodes each. So you could call what's currently released Castor/ia's episode 1 I guess. I'm currently in the process of writing the next character's episode 1 + some additional content for Castor/ia.

The $2 is basically a donation to help fund the project because I have no funding outside of that to pay voice actors, and while I can continue developing the game without putting any money into it if the rest of it goes unvoiced, I feel like voice acting is an important part of the project since it was originally supposed to be an audio drama. I write the scripts in a way that suits voiced better than non-voiced.

Aaaand here's the extra long version if you want it xD

Right now, the project is in a place where I don't even know what an acceptable price would be to charge for the game once it's eventually finished because I don't have experience with releasing commercial games. I kind of never imagined I would ever have the funding available to me to make something to commercial standards. What I do know going by my outlines, drafts, and the like, is that there will be quite a large amount of content by the time the entire thing is finished. Definitely more than $2 worth of content by a long shot.

If you do decide to get Winter Wish, it's more like a donation towards funding the development of the project than a purchase, but I don't think there's any way for me to show it as such here on itch >.< Because WW is quite short and essentially acts as the introductory episode to one character of many.

The biggest challenge in DD's overall development is that it's a project which is pretty reliant on voice acting. Without the VA, it wouldn't have the same flavour I don't think. But VA isn't cheap. For example, after speaking to my friend Anthony (the voice director for Winter Wish) he informed me that to get Castor & Castoria's next episode fully voiced will cost around $800. And me being unemployed means that the only way I can afford to pay the VAs is through supporters donating funds towards the project.

Right now, I'm quite unsure what the best way to proceed is because it's going to cost a lot of money to get each episode for each set of characters voiced. Which means probably asking for some form of money per episode. At the same time, I don't want to piss anyone off who has already donated towards the project >.< because I really appreciate the support and I don't want anyone to feel like their money is being wasted or anything like that.

The other option, of course, is attempting to run a Kickstarter at some point! However, I'm not really sure if enough people would back it when it requires quite a bit of funding. My social anxiety also means I suck at social media and promotion, which isn't exactly a great start to a KS campaign >.< Especially not when the game isn't yet close to completion. So it's a tough situation really.

One of the main reasons I didn't keep working on DD after the jam is because I figured I would never be able to afford to expand it the way I'd like to in a million years because I don't have the money. So I kept it as a side project to work on and continued developing my main project (Clarity in Qualia.) Unfortunately, CiQ hit a brick wall in that I was hoping to run a KS for that in order to fund VA and a CG artist, but there was very little interest in the game when we posted character intro videos on YouTube and stuff. And it's a shame because that one is fully written and if I were to work on just that, I could have the game finished before the end of the year. But I don't know what to do with CiQ when it seems like there aren't many people interested in playing it. So now that I've finished the last couple of jams I wanted to participate in this year (otome jam + Spooktober VN jam) DD is my main project focus.

I'm so sorry for rambling anyhow >.<

What I will say though, is that I hope to always be able to offer free copies of my stuff to anyone who can't afford to support with money because I have been in that position all my life and I know how much it sucks.

TLDR

  •  The $2 for DD Winter Wish is more like a donation towards funding the full game than an actual purchase.
  • I don't know what the full price of the game will be once it's eventually completed, but anyone who has helped with funding will get a discount off of the full game based on what they donated. And hopefully, some sort of extra goodies as well because I'd like to be able to give some kind of extra thank you to those who have supported the development of the game :3
  • Character intro episodes will likely be released episodically for now based on what I can afford to pay VAs for their work. But if it gets to the point that a Kickstarter might be viable to complete the entire project, I may attempt that. If successful, I'll then just be able to work on completing the remainder of the game in one chunk.
  • I will always try to offer free copies of my games for those who cannot afford to support with money for whatever reason.

(I realise that getting funding from various methods could potentially end up quite messy when it comes to issuing discounts and rewards in the end, but I'm not sure how else to deal with funding development right now. I'm willing to go over all donations from all sources manually in order to make sure no one is left out come the full release of the project.)

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Thank you for the reply, but may I also know if you happen to accept through gcash or any other services besides what is offered here?

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I'm not 100% sure what options itch.io offers because I have my account set for them to just handle all of that on my behalf because I wouldn't have a clue what to do >.< haha. 

I have a Ko-fi account and a Patreon as well if they're any help at all :3 The links are on my dev page here: https://melancholy-marionette.itch.io/

I don't think I've heard of gcash before but I can look into it :3 Sorry, I'm not very clued up on that sort of thing >.< haha.

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Well,that was a fun game.The story is pretty cool and the voice acting is marvelous,splendid.Im really impressed with your hardwork.

I reached both ending and both of them are satisfying.At first,i was hoping that there is more ending need to be discovered.Hahaha.and as the results,it only have 2 ending which is good actually.The safe version is kinda calming and heart melting,i must say XD.And the second is very intense.Hahahah.

Last but not least,thank you for making this masterpiece art.Cant wait to wait more from you.You've done me proud,dev!Keep up the good work!!

Oh yeah,one more thing,i let my friend play ur game and this his comment:

"Well I'm not going to comment on every part though XD, but the charac-err I mean Castoria is looking gud👉👉 ,ahaha.  The voice actor are well done, full of emotion, very "menjiwai".

Hope you can understand the last part :D

Thanks again!!

PS:Love ur character, especially Castoria lol.

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Glad you enjoyed it :3 I'm very excited to bring the rest of the game to life! I just wish I could clone myself to make it happen faster, haha. There certainly will be more endings eventually :D Where it cuts off at the moment will be like the end of episode 1 for Castor/ia, and they will probably have about 3 episodes.

Hehe, and I Googled menjiwai so I think I understand :D

Thanks for all of your kind words :3

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I want to praise your wonderful work once again! You have created something interesting, and I am impressed with your abilities! You can see how much effort has been invested, and most importantly, it was worth it!

I got a happy ending, and it was nice. Even though the story is short, I felt its completeness. This is perhaps one of the most important factors for calming the mind after completing something.

The way you wrote the text and set up the emotions, ah, during the passage I physically felt good. And then, when I went to bed after reading the novel, moments from the novel still echoed in my head.

I liked the scenes of proximity (both intimate and not so intimate), I was able to catch the empathy of the heroine, and everything that was happening resonated in me. Oh yeah, it was funny when I was playing a game where I was playing a game where a character was saying I should sleep, not play with him. Incredibly high level of care! And such involvement. Awww.

I am delighted with how smoothly you have written everything, both from the point of view of code and from the point of view of graphical moments.

And I want to emphasize once again how great it is that you gave the opportunity to choose a character! I am glad that I can choose a girl or a guy depending on who my heart desires right now.

I like it, thank you for creating this novel. The work is really amazing, I hope that you will continue to enjoy your hobby! It was music for my soul, eyes and ears.

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Aww, thank you so much for your kind words and support ^-^ It means a lot! Yeah, I was pretty torn because I wanted to include more, but it wasn't a very long game jam that I originally made it for, so I figured that even though I have a longer story to tell, I needed to try and make it feel like it was a complete story in itself for the purposes of the jam.

As I continue to develop the game, I hope to be able to keep the option to choose which version of each character you want to interact with, along with giving the player some pronoun options for MC as well :3 

It makes me happy that you enjoyed it so much <3

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Woah,such a nice game.I love how the game turn from normal to horror.Remind me to ddlc lol.What a traumatizing game.Well,i try to buy this game,but the payment method is kinda hard because i dont have credit card :/.I really want to play it.Is there any other way to purchase it?If u have it,that would be great.So i read about the Free Community Copy.What does that means?U know,just to make sure so i dont misunderstood it.Anyway.If u read and reply this comment, thanks.You are very good at making this masterpiece,keep it up.I hope u make a similar game just like this in the future.It's so goddamn good.I wish u will be a successful developer and gain a lot of money from it.Sorry for my bad English,still learning it :/.Oh one one more thing,why don't u post it on steam?It just my idea :D(Greetings from Malaysia)

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Right now, itch.io and ko-fi are the only ways to support me, well, and Patreon too but that's different with it being more like a subscription thing. I'd absolutely love to have this and my other projects on Steam someday :3 It's just a bit too expensive right now because the last time I checked, they charge $100 for each game you want to have on there >.< and since I never have much money + this project is nowhere near completed, I'm just not at a point yet where I can afford to put it on there, sadly.

You're welcome to have a key to download what there is of the game so far anyhow :3 Just let me know where the best place to send it is.

Thank you for your interest in the game and your kind words :3 I sure would love to be a successful dev someday, haha. My therapist even said that there's probably not much point in me trying to pursue anything else because my mental health puts me at such a big disadvantage when it comes to 'normal' jobs! 

And no need to apologise for your English :D It's good! I can easily understand everything you typed :3 

PS. Love the username :D My brother quotes that a lot, haha.

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Hopefully u can sell ur game on steam someday :D.Lol ur brother is a memer too?XD.Thanks for liking my username lol.Btw for real?You're going to send a key?Bruh u are too kind,i wish i can repay ur kindness :).U can send it on my Email

pls dont ask why i have too much account,i use it for gaming :/

Anyway,thanks again for making a great game and make my day a lot of better.Recently i through a bad time :/.

last but not least,dont apologize how slow your reply is.I understand how busy you are right now,hahahaha.anywayThanks again :D.Stay safe!





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Well, our whole family wind up using a lot of movie quotes in our daily lives, haha.

I just sent the key to the first address that you listed :3 So feel free to delete your emails now by editing your comment if you like!

That sucks you've not had such a good time recently :( I hope that better times are ahead for you and that you're okay.

You stay safe too and have a happy week :3

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Thanks mate!

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Good day! While browsing the Internet in search of visual novels about yandere, I was brought to your abode. I saw how you edited the sprites, making them unique. It is also very impressive that you have called voice actors, and also the possibility of choosing the gender of our love interest! I admire and really want to support your creativity, but my electronic card is not supported. So I feel a little guilty in front of you, but I really want to play. So I would like to ask, are you still sharing the keys of your game? Even if not, thank you for taking the time to read the text! You have wonderful ideas and wonderful implementation, it's cool that creating wonderful things makes you feel better! With love, from me.

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Hey hey! Yeah, I certainly have a soft spot for yandere types, haha. Unfortunately, you're not the first person who can't use their preferred payment method through it, which is a shame. I didn't even realise until recently that they didn't accept certain types of payments and stuff.

You're welcome to have a key anyhow :3 Just let me know where the best place to send it is!

Thanks for all your kind words and for your interest in the project :3

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Thanks for the answer! Perhaps a good solution would be kiwi, despite the commission, this wallet is easier to get than the others required for payment. It may be worth considering other options. The work should be evaluated, because even if you create a project only on the strength of your love, it would be nice to get a monetary reward for it.

I really understand your passion for yandere, huh, it's really nice for me to find like-minded people, and even more so to communicate with content creators. I feel like I'm talking to a star, so I'm very happy~

You can give me your blessing

Once again, I am very grateful that you are ready to share your creation!

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I'll have to look into that then :3

Hehe, yeah, I'm pretty much just a crazy lady who likes crazy characters :D

I just sent the key, so feel free to edit your comment to remove your email :3

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You not only love them (they love you too), but also find an outlet in them, your quiet place.  It's wonderful when hobbies help to alleviate mental problems at least a little. 

I sincerely hope that your therapist helps you, and that content creation also helps you!

Thanks you! I am immensely grateful that you gave me the love I am looking for! I'm going to give some of my love to the beautiful creations that you created!

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That was really fun! wish it was longer, Castor was scary but I dug it lol, hope you make similar games like this in the future!

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I'm glad you enjoyed it :D And your wish will come true because it will be longer at some point :3 The game is still in early development ^-^ So not only will Castor and Castoria have longer stories (what is available now is just their episode 1) there will also be other characters in the future too! It's just going to take me a while to make it all since I have a lot of content planned and I'm working alone, haha.

Thanks so much for the support :3

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shoot i cant afford it :(

I wish had a dollars money 

This is actually a good VN :((

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Sorry my reply is so slow >.< I'm busy irl for most of October, so I haven't been on my PC that much recently >.< Anyways, you're welcome to have a key if you wanna let me know where the best place to send it is :3

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Heya!

Are you the artist of the character sprites or did you hire someone to make some custom ones for your game? If yes, then I think someone ripped your Castoria sprite (and did some edits to it) from your game and used it for their own game they are about to release on Steam:

https://store.steampowered.com/app/1712900/Other_peoples_fiancee_became_my_woman...

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Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know about that :3 I really appreciate it! 

In this instance, that person hasn't done anything wrong because I'm not the original artist for the sprites. They come from an asset pack sold by a Japanese artist called sasAichi, and once you've purchased the pack, you're allowed to do whatever you like with the sprites.

What this person has done is just take the original sprite directly from the asset pack and use it without making any edits to the original version. Whereas I always like to edit any assets I've purchased where possible, just so that they don't end up looking exactly like other people's if they get used in other projects x3 

I just used GIMP to edit all of the colours to something different and more fitting with my project :3 

This is a little VS thing I made a while back when someone on Twitter asked me about the sprites and the artist who created them. It just shows the difference between my edits and the original unedited version. It's great that you picked up on that and took the time to comment though because if it were theft of some sort, I think any dev out there would really appreciate being alerted to it in order to try and do something about it. Thank you again :3

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Thanks for letting me know that it was an asset pack, because you never know.

I haven't reported the game or the dev in case you are wondering. That's why I asked you in the first just to make sure and to let you know. It's just that art/asset theft isn't so uncommon amongst indie dev crowd. Saw this happen often enough when Steam Greenlight was a thing. So I'm always supper sceptical. 

Anyway, thank you for the detailed answer. Hope you have a good day, dear dev.

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Yeah, it's better to be safe. It would absolutely suck to find out someone else was profiting from your hard work >.< I'd be pretty devastated if it happened to me, so absolutely appreciate any heads up :3

That sucks that it's something that happened often with Steam Greenlight >.< 

It's not quite the same thing, but I've occasionally come across commercial games on Steam where I recognise the sprite assets because they're ones I've downloaded myself, and realised, hang on a minute... the terms of use for those assets state that they're for personal/free use only, and commercial use is prohibited >.< I'm guessing the devs think that because the assets are from Japanese artists, they'll never find out, so they can do whatever they like.

The first time this happened, I contacted Steam about it, but they weren't interested in what I had to say, even though I provided direct links to the assets and their terms of use >.< So I just gave up!

Hope you have a brilliant day too :3

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Hi, sorry to bother you.(⌒_⌒;) I really want to play your game, but for some reason I can't buy it. I tried to buy it twice, but nothing happens after entering the card details. Do I have to wait, or does this system simply not support bank cards of my country? ((Greetings from Russia( ̄ω ̄)/) Is there any other way to purchase this visual novel? ଘ(੭ˊ꒳ˋ)੭✧

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Hey hey! No worries :3 Thanks for checking out the game and for trying to support the project ^-^

Hmm, I'm not 100% sure how the payment system works on itch >.< I know that one or two people before have said that they've had problems with payment methods though! You're welcome to try on ko-fi instead: https://ko-fi.com/melancholymarionette

But either way, I can send you a download key if you let me know where the best place to send it would be :3

Hope you are having a good day! 

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ヽ(°〇°)ノ

Thank you for responding. But it looks like Coffee is not an option: on it, the minimum donation amount exceeds what I can give ( ლ(¯ロ¯"ლ)


I am very grateful to you for your responsiveness, thank you for sharing your creativity even selflessly! I hope sooner or later I will be able to repay you

( ´ ∀ `)ノ~ ♡

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__φ(..) My mail: olga20151977@gmail.com

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Sorry about my super slow reply >.< I just sent the key now :3

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I would love to buy this game but where I lived don't use any currency that is avalable in itch.io.So are you going to upload this on Steam If yes, I will be sure to buy this game.If No then it's okay I understand.Well It looks like I am demanding or something ,But I am not😅

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I would love to be able to put the game on Steam at some point for sure :3 But that's quite a long way off, unfortunately >.< Cos the game is nowhere near finished. The £100 fee for adding a game to Steam doesn't help! If not for that, I would have all my games on there, but I just can't afford that kinda money >.<

You're welcome to have a key for itch though if you wanna let me know where is best to send it to :3

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It's Okay I understand:3 Just don't over work yourself stay safe ;)

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hows it going?

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Hey! Well, for DD specifically it's currently going nowhere just because I'm focusing 100% on Spooktober VN Jam x3 And for me personally, I'm exhausted xD I don't work very healthily when it comes to game jams, so I've been doing 15+ hour days this last week or two in an effort to try and get everything for the Spooktober Jam project finished in time for the October 1st deadline >.<

I was hoping to get a little more writing done for DD before the jam began in September, alongside releasing the BxG version of Apartment No.9 before the end of August. I managed to get A9 out, but I didn't get any solid writing done on DD. I managed to expand on some of the route outlines, but that was about it.

August was just a crappy month for me in general though because I got a new diagnosis of bipolar and was put on this new medication that had horrendous side effects for the first couple of weeks >.< I felt more physically ill than any time in my life where I've actually had a cold or food poisoning and stuff. My therapist did warn me it would be a rough ride xD She said she could start me on a half dose where the side effects would be a little less intense, but that it would take more time to get past them because of having to slowly move to the higher dose. She said if I was willing to put up with the higher dose right away, the worst of it should be gone within a month.

I was starting to get pretty worried that the side effects were gonna stop me from even trying to make something for Spooktober Jam, but thankfully, the worst of it did subside in time for me to start concepting with my friend!

Since the jam began at the start of September, that's all I've been working on. With how crappy my self-confidence is, it's not often that I'm able to feel genuinely proud of the stuff I've made, but with this project for Spooktober, I can honestly say I'm proud of it :3 I'm working with a small team of friends and I think it's probably going to be my coolest project yet in terms of how beautiful it looks with my friends' combined art + also with the features I've managed to include. It's the most complicated thing I've coded yet and I've learned a lot!

That'll be out for free this Friday, and then I'm going to slow down my work pace for October because I want to play the other games submitted to the jam, but when I am working, DD will be the primary focus :3

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I just saw Manly's video, and it was great, The game is great, the voice acting, the story, the characters, overall this is a great game, This game should get more attention😀😁.

Sadly tho, cant afford to get the game, my family is having a hard time at work and i am just here sitting...Although this game is really great(sorry i always said "game")

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Aww, I'm glad you think so ^-^ There's still a looooot of work to be done on it before it's complete, so what was in Manly's video is just a tiny snippet of what's to come :3

Sorry to hear about the situation with your family >.< I never have any money, so I know how much it sucks! You're welcome to have a key if you let me know the best place to send it to you :3

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Hey again, Sorry for the Late Reply.

I had some problems on life, i had dengue recently.

You can sent it on my gmail😊

dxmatter0@gmail.com

Thank you so much in Advance i cant wait to play this😁

Again sorry for the late reply

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No worries! I hope you're okay now :3 I've just sent the key to your email so feel free to edit the comment to remove your address if you want!

Have an awesome week :3

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Finally watched the video on this game, and I absolutely fell in love with the characters (Castor/Castoria)! The writing was amazing! The neat little touches depending on what choice you made (bad or good); Like the tiddle on the I changing from a squiggle to a skull if you made a bad choice and their eyes going from clear to cloudy and vice versa depending on said choice! Sad I can't play this myself as I'm too late to the party, as usual lol, so I missed out on both the free price and the community give away. It's such a beautiful VN and I would love to play it for myself!

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Sorry for my slow reply >.< I'm super busy at the moment working on a project for Spooktober VN Jam and the deadline for submission is very soon. I managed to miss your comment notification!

I'm glad you think it looks decent :3 You're welcome to have a key if you wanna let me know the best way to contact you!

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You can contact me on my Twitter! @TheRealVoidPelt


Thank you! *hugs* :3

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Sorry it took me so long to get back to you with the key >.< I just dropped you a message on Twitter now! Like I said there, I was just super overwhelmed trying to finish up my Spooktober VN Jam game in time for the deadline x3 haha. You should have the key now though!

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No no it’s ok! Don’t worry! Like I said, I understand deadlines and all that! I’ve been under plenty myself, and I get overwhelmed all the time!

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i bought this game around 2 months (or more) ago when i saw manly's video, and i only got around to finish it recently since i've been so busy :'( 

this is gorgeous !! the voice acting, the art, and the story -- i loved every bit of it !! i actually played the full version so i went through the suggestive scene and the bloody scene, but that didn't make me love castor any less :') he's beautiful (both him and castoria) and i silently cried when the player said 'you're not my type' because castor is my type :'))

i'm getting sidetracked but i just wanted to say that i absolutely adore this game so much, it's amazing in every way <3

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I know the feeling x3 My brother bought me the 2nd game in the Dark Pictures Anthology for my birthday back at the start of 2021 and despite being super eager to play it, I still haven't even taken it out of the plastic wrap because I've been so busy with other things >.< haha. I'm hoping to take a little bit of a break from my projects in October so I can actually play some stuff!

Thanks so much for supporting the game anyhow :3 I'm so glad you've enjoyed what there is of it so far! 

Yeeeeah, I have a soft spot for Castor x3 Even when I know what he's capable of, Kevin's voice acting just makes me want to forgive him instantly and just pet him like a little puppy xD It's not his fault... he's just doing what he was made to do >.<

I really appreciate you taking the time to comment anyhow! I'm working on a project for Spooktober VN jam right now, but once that's over, I'll be focusing on getting the next episode of DD released :3

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Must protecc Castor/ia's smiles. 

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Yaaaarp :3

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Hey just bought 2 of your games good luck and keep going, much support from Australia 

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Aww, thank you so much ^-^ I really appreciate the support!

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Hello! Found your game through Manly, and immediately bought myself a copy ^^ I absolutely adore this game so far, and the voice acting is wonderful!

I just wanted to ask if it's possible to download the character sprites/references, as I've been wanting to make fanarts to show my appreciation, but I can't see their full body Q_Q. I don't mind paying extra to show support for the game!

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Hey hey! Thanks so much for the support and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed what there is of the game so far :3

I don't know if this will be much help, but I put this together to try and show the full body versions! Fanart would be so cool to see ^-^ They come out pretty small here, but you should be able to download them in full size.

Thank you again!


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Hello. I have a question. Is this game available on any other website other than itch.io?
I ask because I had been intending to purchase it and then promptly realized that the site doesn't support Paysafe cards.

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Hey there! Thanks for your question. Sadly, not at the moment. I'd love to have it on Steam, but that $100 fee to add a game there is a killer if you're a penniless dev like me >.< I'll get it on there at some point when it's closer to being completed, but while it's in development still I was just going to keep it here on itch since it's free to upload. Was there anywhere else in particular that you had in mind for it to be hosted? I can probably upload it elsewhere provided it's free to upload.

Sorry for the hassle >.< You're not the only one to run into a problem like that with itch's available payment methods :( And thank you for your interest in the game :3

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I sadly, have no idea. I'd say Game Jolt, but it appears that it doesn't accept Paysafe cards either. Unfortunate.
Hmm. What are your opinions on the Roblox site?

In any case, it appears I'll have to wait for the full release or just ask for a community copy.
Either way I'm sure it'll be well worth the wait.

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You're welcome to have a community copy. Just let me know where to send it :3

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Hello dear devs

i was so late for community free copy and i watched video on channel ManlyBadass Hero, and i really liked this game. I like the story, characters, ambience and other things.

I wish you more succses in the future with this game! ^_^

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Hey hey!

I'm so glad you liked what you saw from Manly's playthrough :3 If not for the video, the game would still be largely unknown because it didn't have many views or downloads outside of the jam until Manly's video, haha.

You're welcome to have a key if you want one. Just let me know where is best to send it :3

Thank you for your kind words. They're much appreciated!

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Thanks for the answer

If you want send it on my email key and i treally want it and i will let you know about the key and about hte game when i finish my playtrough.

^_^ 

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No problem :3 If you let me know your email address then I can send you the key. If you don't want to write it publically, you're welcome to DM it to me on Twitter if you like: @Marionette_Mask

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My email is: kljajicbosko95ds@gmail.com

and im sorry for late reply because i got some problems in my family and i got on COVID-19 test positive and its not big its small type and i would really like to play that game.

Again sorry in advance ^_^

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No worries :3 I hope you didn't get too ill from it and that you get better soon!

I've just sent the key to you :3

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Hi, I came across your game from watching Manlybadasshero and just wanted to say that your writing is awesome * ^ * 
I've seen plenty of stories and how they depict and write the yandere character. But something about yours just feels more appealing. like, the way they act and speak, they feel more realistic. Actually made me fall for Castoria's character. Way more appealing than the usual "I want to kill you because I love you" cliche, at least for me anyway. 

You definitely deserve more support and I look forward to any future projects written by you. I wish you all the best! 

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Aww, that's so sweet of you to say! Thank you so much :3 I don't really have confidence in anything I do, haha. But it means a lot to me to hear such kind words ^-^

I'm glad you enjoy the way I wrote her. Part of the reason I got into making VNs in the first place is because I'm a huge fan of yandere characters in general, and I just wanted to add more to the world, haha. My main goal was to add more English speaking male yandere characters because there don't seem to be that many of them in existence x3 but I enjoy making female counterparts too!

I'll be releasing the BxG version of my otome jam game, Apartment No.9 very soon + at the end of September, provided things go smoothly, I'll have another free game out for Spooktober jam. Once that's finished, I'll be spending more time working on the next episode of DD :3

Thank you for your kind words and support ^-^

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Hi! I normally do not do this, but after reading what this VN is and has to offer has me EXCITED. I adore VN's with this type of storyline, where the player themselves is apart of it. I've been browsing for something new and that's how I came across this (I haven't seen MBH's play of it yet, glad I haven't though cause now I want to play it myself and be surprised!)
I would greatly appreciate if I get could a free copy as I currently do not have the funds, but with what I've read so far, I certainly want to support this project! The artwork is lovely and the characters have already gotten my attention. If you cannot send a copy, that's alright! I'll definitely buy the game when I'm able and look forward to the story! Keep up the lovely work :)

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Hey hey! Sorry for my slow reply >.< I was out walking for much of the weekend and I didn't get much chance to go on my PC. 

I'm glad you like the look of it anyhow :3 You're welcome to have a key! Just let me know where is best to send it to you and I'll get one sent as fast as I can.

Thanks for all the kind words ^-^

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No worries! And thank you so much! I truly appreciate it!
you can send it to my email:
RoyaleTeaStrnge@Gmail.com

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Sent :3

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I've played through one of the endings, and I definitely enjoyed it! I'm going to make sure I get all the endings for the game.
Thank you so much for allowing me to play the game, I truly appreciate it.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it :3 Thanks for playing and commenting :D

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Hi, I sent an email about the community copies, and was wondering how long it would take for an answer. (I was just writing this because I didn't know if you saw it or not)

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Hey! Sorry my reply is a bit slow >.< I've not been at my PC all day as I'm ill at the moment. Just read your email though and will send the key shortly :3

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I just found this gem, and dang, I'm too late for the free copies :(

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You're welcome to drop me an email to: melancholicmarionette@gmail.com
I don't mind giving keys to anyone that can't afford to support with donations cos I know how much it sucks to not have money since that's the story of my life x3 This is more like a taster. The full game is still in development :3

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Thanks :)))

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Sent :3

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